"Nau Mai haere mai - I am in a year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School. My teacher is Miss Van der Voort.
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
There maybe mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
This is a well organized explanation of these body parts. The detail and facts add credibility to your knowlege, awesome. Your introduction should include all the topics you are going to write about and a topic per paragraph would improve structure.
This is a well organized explanation of these body parts. The detail and facts add credibility to your knowlege, awesome. Your introduction should include all the topics you are going to write about and a topic per paragraph would improve structure.
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