"Nau Mai haere mai - I am in a year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School. My teacher is Miss Van der Voort. Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience. There maybe mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
Wednesday, 11 April 2018
ww1 poem
Gallipoli Landing
gun fires
explosions
destruction
muddy trenches
rotting people in the sun
Tuesday, 28 November 2017
The Octopus
The fishermen chucked the trap into the water. Two crabs went into the trap then the octopus went into the trap like the wind. Then the octopus ate the crabs like a vacuum cleaner. Then the octopus was stuck in the trap like the crabs. Then the fishermen was pulling the trap up, then the octopus was trying to get out of the trap then the octopus got out by using his tentacles then it was free but the fishermen was angry.
Friday, 27 October 2017
Giraffe And Lions
First the lions were chasing the giraffe so that they could eat the giraffe. Then the giraffe was flicking sand into the lions eyes. Suddenly a lion leaped onto the giraffe but the lion fell off the giraffe and onto the sand. The giraffe stepped on the lions back and the lion stopped chasing the giraffe because it was too sore to chase the giraffe.
lions Chasing A Giraffe
First the lions were chasing a giraffe so that they could eat the giraffe. Then the giraffe was flicking sand into the lions eyes. suddenly a lion leaped onto the giraffe but
First the lions were chasing the giraffe so that they could eat the giraffe. Then the giraffe was flicking sand in to the lions eyes. suddenly a lion leapt onto the giraffe but the lion fell off the giraffe onto the sand. The giraffe stepped on the lions back and the lion stopped chasing the giraffe because it was too sorer to chase the giraffe anymore.
Friday, 20 October 2017
Dragon
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